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Sweet as can be, you ran from me. In the light of the moon, we speak, and lies fall like fireflies, staining the land with envy and rage, but letting the flow of emotions sting your words. Gasping and crying, became a way of life, as you screamed we slipped free. You fell into me, and I held the pieces back, back from what you and I used to be, now more than I can believe. It all fell through and so did you, just the way you knew, and I knew, too, just not in you. They fell, hardly a slight sigh and no more words than felt seriously. Hold straight and tense, for that is what they need, not the helpless thing I held, but the brave helping rage. I give up. I love you.
©2008-2009 ~B00KAH0LIC
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So, uhm, yeah. I was exhausted at maybe 3 in the morning? Some time around that. I started typing, I decided to save it. I just thought I'd put it up, don't know if I'll take it down or not, but I just wanted to see what some of you think about my rambling mind. =)

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:iconroxannexron:
hmm... very interesting...i like the use of words lol

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My god it's gorgeous whenever that boy smiles. :heart:
I smile for you Brandon Riley :D
:iconb00kah0lic:
Thanks. =)
Did anything stick out the most? Any phrase or something?
:iconroxannexron:
"lies fall like fireflies, staining the land with envy and rage" i adore this line

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My god it's gorgeous whenever that boy smiles. :heart:
I smile for you Brandon Riley :D
:iconb00kah0lic:
Hehe. ^^ Thanks!
So what do you see in your mind when you think of that?
Each word makes me see something different. Fireflies in the moonlight, a blood stained land, someone about to burt with envy and rage. Just flashes of things in my mind.
:iconroxannexron:
mmmhhhmmm thats why i liked it so much. I read it over 2 er 3 times bc first it was flashes of different stuff, but then you could melt them together and make a picture.

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My god it's gorgeous whenever that boy smiles. :heart:
I smile for you Brandon Riley :D
:iconb00kah0lic:
^^ Sweet! Took me about eight times before I was able to meld it into one picture.
:iconroxannexron:
haha :hug: anywho great work!

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My god it's gorgeous whenever that boy smiles. :heart:
I smile for you Brandon Riley :D
:icona-b-i:
i like this...glad you posted it :)

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it's a nerd's world.

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